Scream

 I being like everyday walking down the road. Today I smelt something different the air, was not the same therefore I began to worry. I was walking toward the big bridge, as I walked on to it I started to hear noises as I came around, the wind was really thick and it started to rain. As it began to rain and it was creepy so then I began to run not slowly today but really fast. Something grabbed me fast. All I could do was stop right there. I began to scream really loud. I was only half way there and I was not able to sprint the other half to get out of here.  When I got to the other side after I went and  figured out what had got me, it was the wind monster so therefore that is why I was all scared. Don’t begin to tell me that I am a chicken because you would have done the same thing.  So that night when I got home from my adventure I was telling my boyfriend and my parents and sister and 2 brothers about this and they all though that I was crazy because they really didn’t think something like this would have happened to me. Till I began to cry because I was so scared and then that was when they all began to believe me. 

Good Writing

I personally think I am not really a good writer. In this class I should be able to improve my writing. Some of the writing things that I think make a good writer are you don't just look at your work once you will always see things that need to be fixed. They also use words that you would not always use or words that describe more than you would us to making it fun. They are able to us a variety of words choose for sentiences. For instance one of there sentience could be really short or long and it would still be really good with there work.